The objective of this critique was to point out any final changes to make sure the booklet is prepared for the final submission. I didn't have time to make the changes from the suggestions in my critique to be able to show it. However, I was told to change "Name and Theme" to "Mixed Forecast" in the table of contents. In the schedule, I was told to make the "rm" consistently lower case and make them a lighter font weight. On the speakers pages I was told to place the photo below the name with the description below it and then have the lecture information at the bottom. This was to fix the inconsistent spacing between the lecture and the speaker description. I was also told to make the stroke weight around the images lighter and change the note lines to grey and stretch them all the way to the right margin. For the thank you to our sponsors page, I was told to make the left margin on the right page bigger and make sure its consistent with all the other margins in the booklet. For the save the date page, I was told to lower the description and make the gap between it and the website paragraph smaller.
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