This draft was for the final poster and brochure critique, so the goal was to have it finalized with only some small tweaks to identify and fix.
In this draft, I moved the ice chunks farther away from each other and the text, made the colours less saturated, moved the dates to the same line, and aligned the text to the edge of the "R". The ice chunks were still over powering the text a little so I made them less bright and moved them farther away from the text, so they're enclosing upon it less. Re-aligning the text along the "R" made the alignment stronger and putting the dates on the same line made them more cohesive and legible.
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